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"Does that hurt?"

"Mmph."

"That's not a real answer, Ryan."

"I can handle it."

"That's what you say now," Rylie said. She examined the gash near Ryan's right elbow. "If this swells up, tell me immediately. That could mean there's an internal infection."

Ryan grunted. Rylie held his hand up to wrap a fresh bandage on top and pressed her hands against his arm to smoothen the creases. Ryan turned to look at her, but she appeared to not notice. The small blonde put back her equipments back with an air of a well-practiced healer.

She closed her case shut and spoke to Ryan, "Well, you seem fine. Just tell me if you notice any changes."

"You'll be sure to see them first." He replied teasingly. Rylie gave a brief smile before she headed towards the living room.

"Hey." Ryan voiced out. Rylie ignored him and walked on. When she reached the front door of his apartment, Ryan spoke again, "Are you leaving?"

"Yes." Rylie replied, determined.

"Why?"

Her eyes flashed. "You should be the one to know that answer."

Ryan became confused. He stood up from his bed and slowly walked to her. "I… don't know."

Rylie closed her eyes and took a deep breath. When she opened them back, he was standing close. She said, "It's fine, Ryan. I'm over-thinking things– that's all. I should go."

Ryan grabbed her wrist before she could touch the doorknob. "I want to know," he said earnestly. Rylie looked uncomfortable with the request.

"It's nothing. I'm just being silly." The blonde tried to wriggle out of his grip, but his grasp was strong.

"Ryle. Tell me."

Rylie avoided his green eyes pooling with concern. She bit her lip and said, "I just care too much. Like you always say, I worry a lot."

"Huh?"

Rylie gave up on resisting her feelings. She snapped her hand away from Ryan and placed both her hands on her hips. "I care too much, idiot. I care when you're missing for weeks and I don't hear anything, and you come back at the brink of death! I'm scared all the time because I don't know the next time that's gonna happen, or even if you're going to survive. And I hate it when you come back and we pretend things are normal when I had gone through hell waiting!"

Rylie stopped and breathed in and out heavily. She had only snapped like that twice before in her life, and she hadn't planned on this. She felt her heartbeat thumping in her ears as she looked up to Ryan.

Oddly enough, the boy looked calm. He kept his distance from her and nodded. "I'm sorry," he said.

Rylie sighed. "No, I'm sorry. What I said was stupid. This is our job, I should know this--"

"I care too." He said gently.

"Wh… What?"

"I care, Ryle." Ryan gave her a smile. "Have you forgotten? I… I love you." With that Ryan leaned forward and placed his lips on her forehead. Rylie closed her eyes and sighed at their contact. Ryan too, had his eyes shut in that moment.

When he pulled back, Rylie snaked her arms around Ryan's neck. Instantly, she gravitated towards his bare chest. Rylie placed her head against his beating heart.

"I've missed you… a lot," she said. Rylie snuggled her nose in between the crevices of Ryan's well-toned torso. She felt calmer when Ryan caressed and played with her unbound hair. He then pulled her in for a tighter embrace.

They broke apart at the beeping sound of a transmitter. Rylie felt her heart sank when Ryan approached the thumb-size device to look at the message.

"Who is it?" She asked.

"Zack."

"Oh. For paperwork?"

"No." Ryan headed towards her. "New mission."

"Of course." She said drily. She rubbed out the dust that got into her eyes before smiling at Ryan. "It was good while it lasted."

"It's switched off." Ryan handed her the transmitter.

"You will go anyway."

"Maybe not this time."

"Ryan, we signed up for this. It's our responsibility." Rylie stepped closer to him. She wrapped her arms around him strongly and let herself be indulged in the moment.

"Ryle, you must know," Ryan whispered above her head. "I will change this one day."

Rylie loosened her grip. "Please. Don't talk."

The latter bent down until he was at eye level with the girl. His green eyes had a tint of sadness. "I promise you, Ryle. For us."

Rylie let their foreheads touched as she replayed his words again in her head. She felt overwhelmed with different emotions. But all her thoughts were lost when Ryan grazed his lips over hers. A burning intensity was released at the contact: each touch they shared was more poignant than the last. For a moment, their world was timeless as they engaged in one kiss.

Their connection shattered when Rylie's transmitter began beeping in her pocket. They let go of each other, slightly confused. Then quickly, Rylie checked her message.

"It's Zack. Maybe I'm joining you guys." She said cheerily. A faint crunching sound distracted her from newfound hope. She looked up to see Ryan's fist clenched tightly on his transmitter. The device had broken into a few pieces, which Ryan threw forcefully into the trash bin.

"Was that necessary?" Rylie asked, shaking her head. Ryan nodded as he stared at her long mane that was swinging along with her motions.

Rylie sighed and moved towards him. "Someday, right? You promise?"

Ryan stared longingly into her eyes and felt their bodies reconnected. He nodded again as he sank his head to stay next to hers in their embrace.
Tell me fair readers: Ryan/Rylie + extreme sappiness = Win or Fail?

I'm a little iffy with this story, but I adore Ryan's protectiveness. :giggle:

Sorry for such a short read, and possibly plenty of grammar mistakes. I'm in a slight rush, and I'm feeling like life is crappy to me now (It's a phase, it'll go away soon).

Love you!


Ryan & Rylie (c) WATCHERS
WATCHERS (c) *kai-isolated & *nixcoo
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FallRockPumpkins Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful writing. :love: Keep up the great work with these stories, they are fantastic.
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Writer
Awww, thanks so much. It's a real great pleasure to know you like them.
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TheBlueGuardian Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
The extreme sappiness = big win

It's just really heart warming :'3 You could just feel Ryan's sincerity when he said those things to Rylie.

Wonderful piece :> I love it
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Writer
Thank you sweetie. I have to say, your comments give me tremendous joy. And a good opportunity to look back at my old writings. This story, in particular, I have grown to like it more since I posted it. :D
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TheBlueGuardian Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Dn'aww it's a pleasure :3
:iconiloveyouplz: I am so glad :'3
It's always a good feeling to look back at your older works and feel sentimental towards them.
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NADreamer Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I adore Ryan's protectiveness too :giggle: I just love your stories even if I don't comment on them. :love:
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011   Writer
Also, thanks for all the faves! I'm honored! :dance:
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NADreamer Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011   Writer
Thanks, I really appreciate the comment. :D
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SoulEater123 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Student General Artist
((my stupid opinion~ don't need to listen to me or read this xD))

need longer ryry stories!!!! in battle with unknown enemies? making it more intense and suspenseful for readers to get drawn in can improved ur writing more than how awesome it is now!!!! xD :heart:
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011   Writer
Hahaha that is a really good critique. I will put that thought in for future stories to come along. Thanks!
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SoulEater123 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Student General Artist
ur welcome!!~ and good luck with all ur stories :meow:
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VimmyOtto Featured By Owner May 16, 2011
Good stuff, as per usual. :D

It was short, so I've not a whole bunch to comment on, but it was nice in that it was a simple read. Unless you hadn't stated so in the description, I wouldn't have guessed it was slightly filler- I only would've taken note it was short, and a quick read that was simple and enjoyable.

Good stuff, gonna go play catchup on other stuff now. :D
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Hirui Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
I read half of this and had to turn on nickleback "someday" from there The long road album. Seem'd to fit.

Love this story ^_^
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Aisste Featured By Owner May 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Waaaaaaaah... Sooo sweet! > <
:love:

Good job! :)
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Sunshine-Valley Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So much melting of my heart just occurred.
Can't even make coherent thoughts; too much adorableeee
I just love Ryan so much. He's so sweet and protective :3
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AkatsukiMirage Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Super cute! :D
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the-angry-blob Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
RyRy is cute but there's too much of it D:
So... AWW SCREW IT ITS A WIN ANYWAY.
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JuJukins Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
-squee-
SO ADORABLE.
No grammar mistakes popped out at me but I was reading kind of quickly because of the ZOMGADORABLEIMUSTREADMORE, but if you ever want it I'd be happy to look over/correct stories if you'd like. :)
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raining-ash Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
Complete and utter win :D
I love your writing, especially when it's those two! They're so cute :3
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KiriRamdeo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I...totally got happy shivers at the description that he held her wrist strongly and expressed really wanting to know (for him that's really wanting to know considering the way he usually acts ^^; ) eeeeeeee =D

Omg, Rylie snapped at him......o.o (you can totally tell I'm typing the comments and reactions as I read lol).

Wait....he said WHAT now? He said "I love you" AND smiled? o.o I think my wish just came true: more expression even if rare from Ryan.....=3 *does a friggin happy dance*

...there's friggin sadness in his eyes....*melt* I...don't think I have words for this one.....I would totally write you a paragraph on how heart-caressing this was but I can't find the words right now. I might just be drunk in fuzzy-feeling, especially considering it's Ryan (which is making me miss Dawny). It makes me want to work with my quartet who are basically like this, though their missions are a bit more....well they travel between worlds but I'll get to it later. Anyways, check back in, like, a few days. I may have re-solidified from this floor puddle x__x

The reading flow stubs (instead of toe stubs) =P
- "The small blonde put back her equipments back with an air of a well-practiced healer" there's one too many "back" in putting the equipment away o.o;
- "Rylie let their foreheads touched as she replayed his..." the tense of 'touched' should be present, no?
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germanpunk101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
:3 Aww
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angel914 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Ohh... How romantic :D
More stories with them, please ;)
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B135071 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wiiiiiiiiiinnnnnn. :D
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Lupus-astrum Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Epic win
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Mojo0o Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Nyahaaa!! :love:
it got hot in here for a moment .... but i loved it..
and i think the way ryan is over protective is cute !!
i want a ryan plushie so that i can hug and squeeze him when ever i want to :hug:

i love your writting Nix..... i dunno why but when ever i read i get so involved that i end up being happy .... VERY HAPPY !!!
i know i've said this alot ..... but again... THANK YOU for making this with kai .... it's really fun !!
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Mojo0o Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Nyahaaa!! :love:
it got hot in here for a moment .... but i loved it..
and i think the way ryan is over protective is cute !!
i want a ryan plushie so that i can hug and squeeze him when ever i want to :hug:

i love your writting Nix..... i dunno why but when ever i read i get so involved that i end up being happy .... VERY HAPPY !!!
i know i've said this alot ..... but again... THANK YOU for making this with kai .... it's really fun !!
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TheHopeOfTellok Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Most definitly a win of course! :love:
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Desolate-Revenant Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
win. totally.
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Tsurtsurel12 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Well written.Protectiveness.Women seem to fall for that...
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Einstainer Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well this story was definitely a win!!!
It felt so light and easy to read, yet so interesting...
Even though it may have been short it was not noticeable or it didn't matter, becouse it felt perfect for this story
Now I gotta read your previous story that I haven't been able to concentrate enough to be able to read it

I adore his protectiveness too, but in this story the details and information of his personality you have given
was so well transferred to the readers.

Love you too!!
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Red-N Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good as always... :) I really thought for a moment that there would be a 'will you marry me?' at the end :D Haha!

Love,

Red-N.
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
Heeee I believe a proposal is (heavily) implied. :D
Wouldn't that scene be absolutely cute? teeheehee
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Red-N Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Right?! You should totally write it! Spring+flowers+proposal :giggle: Rylie would die of happiness!
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Silverdragon892003 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
May I ask what series this is from? Or is it your own personal fiction? Either way, I love it!
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
The story is a fiction project that I'm collaborating with my best friend =kai-isolated If you check her out, she a talented artist who draws these characters and their lives.

Thanks for loving this! I love when new readers feel they can relate to the stories too! :D
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xfoxflamex Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Win, So full of WIN that it spills out of my computer, onto my desk, over the edge, onto several scattered sticky notes that then engage in a small battle, and leaves me with a Texas sized mess of WIN to clean up.
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
Perfect answer! If I can faved you comment, I would :glomp:
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gingercutie17 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
loved it!!!!!
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:iconnixcoo:
nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
Thank you :D
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gingercutie17 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
welcome
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BlueEyedOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
win
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:iconnixcoo:
nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
Good to know :boogie:
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Kubulu Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: I adore RyRy!!!
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
*sighs*

Who doesn't adore this couple? I think they're a lil boring, but they can't help but be damn cute! :giggle:
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MzzAzn Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
aww it's so cute but it makes me all mad that they got interrupted -_- SKJF:LSKDJFKSDFNDS //is pissed// THANKS NIXCOO -__-

Rylie snuggled her nose in between the crevices of Ryan's well-toned torso.... <--OMG ... let's revise that

Rylie Jade snuggled her nose in between the crevices of Ryan's well-toned torso.

:drool: YES ROFLMAO
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
Hahahahaha you need some of that 'relaxing drink' jade.... Then you should follow through the purpose of that drink... and get to play that scene you modify, again and again...




I hope this comment is PG-13. I feel like I should put a mature content warning on this. Heheheheh!! :giggle:
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MzzAzn Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
ROFLMAO :la:

I like pg 13 and up comments :eyes:
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011   Writer
Ufufufufufufu i bashfully like them too.... :sprint:
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glaslow Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
aeogiahgsi
ryry
hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngh
everywhere
sob
rylie is so cutenfaohgia
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