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Rylie was pleasantly surprised. She looked up to him, an easy smile on her lips as a simple token of gratitude. Their eyes met, but only briefly. Something caught Rylie's eyes, and she darted her gaze above his well-tousled head. Jace followed the direction of her glance, and gave a half-chuckle when he saw what it was.

"Smooth." He said, as his hazel orbs caught her blue-grey ones. Seeing the rising red in her cheeks, Jace teasingly nudged her and whispered into her ear, "You'd think they would be more creative about where they'll hang mistletoes around here."

He made a grand gesture of looking at both sideways before playfully adding, "People sure want a smooch in between the sick ward room and the busy corridor. Talk about getting that private moment right."

Rylie bit her lip to suppress a giggle, but couldn't resist a wide smile. Jace rubbed the back of his neck and grinned. He enjoyed nothing more than seeing her bright, amused eyes that he had incited. "So, is that a yes on having Christmas dinner with me?"

Rylie laughed and shook her head at his candor, her ponytail swinging back and forth. "I'd love to, but, it'll be weird. I'm with… -"

"Ryan, I know." His charm didn't waver the slightest. "I'm just saying, if he doesn't get back from his mission tomorrow, you can always spend dinner with me and my family. They're coming here."

"As friends?"

Jace motioned a sad frown with two fingers. "If you insist, milady" he said before breaking into a good-hearted laugh. "It'll be fun, Rylie; I'll make sure you'll have an un-forgettable birthday."

"Thanks, Jace" she said kindly. "I'll think about it."

"Good." His smiling face gazed onto hers.

"Well, we should get back to work."

"Yeah, but hold on a second." Rylie turned to look at him, when Jace gave her a sweet peck on the cheek. As she turned a slight pink, the boy shot her a cheeky grin. "It's just tradition."

Rylie gave a silent laugh and shooked her head at his boyish assertiveness. She waved him off, insisting that they shouldn't be taking a break longer than the five minutes allotted. As Jace watched her blonde ponytail trailing Rylie's moves, Jace couldn't help but muttered under his breath: "Take that, Ryan."
This is the 1st part of the series.
2nd part >> [link]
3rd part >> [link]

This series is inspired after I saw this drawing: [link]

I don't know why I took Ryan's offense personally, but decided to do a comeback with this piece. I've gotten love-hate reviews, but I think we all can believe this can happen, heheh.

Zack, Ava, Nicky, Dawn, Ryan & Rylie (c) WATCHERS
WATCHERS (c) *kai-isolated & *nixcoo
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annaoi Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is quite interesting. Although I'm still rooting for RyRy, that Jace character is adorable. I'm one of those people who always liked the other good dude, but yeah... RyRy is pretty solid.
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011   Writer
Isn't Jace just so cute? Even I'm a lil smitten by him. doesn't care about RyRy anymore Teehee!
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annaoi Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG, Now I'm wondering what Jace looks like!
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011   Writer
Here you go: [link]

He's pretty cute :D
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annaoi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!!! :la:
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Hirui Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Interesting twist! Wasn't expecting this at all and that makes for the best type!

Can't wait to read what happens on Christmas! *anticipation!*
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011   Writer
Hahah, I'm writing sequels for this fic now. One is about to be uploaded soon! :la:
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MzzAzn Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
ORRR i'm happy.. WITH both :eyes: *runs off*
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011   Writer
BAHAHAHA maybe rylie is into experimenting.... :D
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MzzAzn Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
aww this is sooo cute ;u; i can't wait to hear what happens. i'm happy both ways LMAO
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011   Writer
Thanks Mzzy! :glomps:
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hayden-desu Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
aksdchfzsfvdxkvxjdvk Jace:iconmonkeyloveplz:
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011   Writer
Hehehe i looove Jace. I might have him reappear in another Xmas story :D
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hayden-desu Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
YES PLZ!!! :iconwantplz:
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Reconyz Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Daww Jace..always trying his best for Rylie :D. This was cute~
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011   Writer
I love Jace in this one. He is adorable! :la:
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Reconyz Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is! I really like him. I think we should see more of him because he sounds so interesting! :dummy:.
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Rivalhopeso Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
looool yeah they are gonna whip you this is cheeky :3 but you wrote it very realistically, as in i could imagine a scenario like this easily happening. It's very confusing when mistletoe is just strewn about along the ceiling. very stressful lol!

What's gonna happen on christmas eh? weeeeell... im guessing the obvious thing would be that Rylie isn't at home and eatign with Jace when Ryan gets home or something like that. peut-etre?

what do rylie and jace work as?
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011   Writer
Jace and Rylie works at the hospital for the spies. I thought the mistletoe was cute, have u ever had an awkward experience with one?

Btw, I like your Rival, there' a mix of angst and merriness in that. I'll put it in the mix :D
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Rivalhopeso Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:P thanks and Kai and Hayden may feel even more strenuous xD fortunately i havent had an awkward experience with mistletoe because very rarely do i see people hang it up around where i go :P thank god! though it's always in the back of your mind to keep wary of especially whne you're at a party with lots of older people Dx

looking forward to your next installation *goes to read your previous stuff :3*
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011   Writer
Hehehe i have a few ideas on my sleeve :)
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Rivalhopeso Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol on your sleeve or up your sleeve? :3

i'm liking your stuff. i don't usually bother to read stuff on dA but your style is fluent to read and feels real and genuine! looking forward to more!
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nixcoo Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011   Writer
Wow, up my sleeve of course... my head was not thinking straight if i said the other.

And yayy thanks for liking my stuff. Good to know its enjoyable to read :D
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Rivalhopeso Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol easy mistake to make xD

yeah! xDD
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